Spent a couple hours in the last few days detailing this organization's lore. Would appreciate feedback on 1. Ways to improve the story (more information, too much information, grammatical flaws, etc.) 2. Ways to improve the general aesthetic of the page (logos, layout, etc.) Note: I have not updated the banner yet, as that is the orgs centerpiece I haven't had time to photoshop anyting yet. https://robertsspaceindustries.com/orgs/FROZENTREE